It's really good. It could have gone more in depth but ut's fine as is. I don't know about the, "I only miss you more." part. It seemed a bit overdone in the past, but the rest of the poem does stand pretty good on it's own. Didn't really see any seplling mistakes or anything either.

I agree ^^ The flow was a little off at times, but it's an impressive meaning, not the deepest poem, but the rhyming is good, I liked the original structure - it suited the poem well.

Peace. [Sole]

I liked ths one so muchhh,its fantastic..and i read "BROKEN"too..its incredible..ur words so strong and sad..ur style in writin very amazin..keep up da good work..wish u all da best..5/5..

This poem was really great! I can relate to it a lot! I loved how it flowed! 5/5!