YOU WERE RiGHT...

by NewAccount   Apr 16, 2006


HOW CAN SHE BE SO GREAT,
OR WAS i JUST THE MiSTAKE.
WHy iS SHE SO MUCH BETTER THAN ME,
I`LL NEVER AMOUNT TO THE THiNGS SHE`LL BE.

SHE`S THE ONE THAT SHiNES ;; NOT ME,
i`M HURTiNG WHy CAN`T ANyONE SEE.
THEy ALWAyS SAiD i WOULD BE THE MiSTAKE,
THE LOOKS iN THEiR EyES i`M STARTiNG TO HATE.

yOU ALL KNEW i`D BE THE ONE TO FALL,
yOU HAD NO iNTENTiONS OF HELPiNG ME AT ALL.
SO i GUESS THAT`S WHy i SiT iN My ROOM,
LOOKiNG AT THE KNiFE WAiTiNG FOR MY DOOM.

THiS iS HOW THE STORy WiLL END,
UNDER THE PRESSURE i JUST COULDN`T BEND.
yOU ALL EXPECTED TOO MUCH OUT OF ME,
TO My HEART NO ONE WiLL EVER HOLD THE KEy.

i`VE SPENT TOO MANy TEARS ON yOU,
HOPEFULLy SHE WON`T END UP LiKE ME TOO.
SO CONGRATULATiONS i GUESS yOU WERE RiGHT,
i REALLy DiD GiVE iT My BEST FiGHT.

NOW i SiT HERE && LOOK AT A PiCTURE OF HER,
WHAT WENT WRONG ;; i`M STiLL NOT SURE.
iT KiLLS ME TO KNOW yOU WOULD ALL MiSS HER,
S H i T i CAN`T BELiEVE i`LL DiE BECAUSE OF My SiSTER.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    OMG! THEY KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER BUT MORE SAD EVERYTIME! MY SISTER IS THE SAME WAY! I FEEL LIKE I LIVE IN THE SHADOW! DON'T GIVE IN! IT'S OK! THE WAY YOU WRITE POETRY, YOU MUST BE BEAUTIFUL! THE BOY AGAIN DOESN'T KNOW WHAT HE'S MISSING! GOOD LUCK! DON'T GIVE UP!

    x3------SHELBY

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Oh wow.
    that was a surprise ending. this is beautiful. but its so sad...don't really do this! and you DO shine, trust me. that boy is not worth your time of day. one day you'll realize that.
    but i still haven't realized that for myself, so why am i giving you advice when i can't even take my own? lol.
    oh and i got a new poem. maybe you'll like it?
    5/5
    ...lauren...
    =)

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