That was a very sweet poem, i like it alot
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

'Your deep blue eyes
And your silky blonde hair
Still make me melt
And wish that I was there'

Awesome stanza - I can relate :( Though a little differently. Very well written - loved the whole poem. Makes me want to cry!!

Peace. [Sole]

Nice job, try to add some more imagery

"Your deep blue eyes
And your silky blonde hair
Still make me melt
And wish that I was there"

I like how you described him..* Usually when people write love poems, they don't do that.

The poem is really good. Everything will be ok though. You'll get over him sooner or later. I'm sure you will. Just stay strong :)

OMG! I loved this one! It was so good! You are such a great writer! Keep up the good work! 5/5