Comments : Death

  • 18 years ago

    by loenly angel

    This poem iis for chris

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Whoa, Very great poem, but MANY mistakes. I always use spellcheck, It really helps... OKAY!

    As I walk to the Valley of Death,
    I fear no evil.
    I sense them coming for me,
    so sad, so unloved,
    so unlike me,
    so as I walk through the Valley of the Shadow of Death,
    I shall not fear no evil or be evil.
    Nor an angel can follow behind me
    Death is saying follow him and I shall be dead.
    So I follow the Shadow and now I feel no pain just nothing in me.
    So I walked though the Valley of the Shadow of Death I fear no evil.

    Pretty got thought and story,

    5/5