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  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    But today a dear friend challenged me
    That it is about my happiness I should write
    Any friend who really knows the real
    Knows I can never back down from a fight.

    i really liked that stanza not just because I am tha dear friend, because its so true....I didn't want u to write because I know you only wrote when things were bad so I did not want to wish bad uponyou again, but thats why i thought well why aren't you writing about your happiness?! I'm just happy your happy Eirisa...I read this poem then your old ones and thank God for the change!! I just don't know what to say anymore seeings how I write an essay on your comments! Love you titta and no problem for the inspiration..glad your writing again
    Chelsey-Lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow, i can relate because i just reciently started to write about my happiness, GOOD WRITE>

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Eirisa...how beautiful penned you've done here, yeah you're just greater than great poet, from beginning till then...i hope everything well with you, and i wanted you to know, i enjoyed myread your beautiful poem....have a good day, take care.

    bert.