Very interesting....I like it...the detail was great and your use of words was one to be remembered....very beautiful poem...

I love this its a beautiful write xxx

Very good poem, how have i not found any of your writings before now? they are wonderful I am impressed

Ive commented on this in the club forums I think but yeh, I like this poem its got a nice flow to it =] well done dearest =]

and of course.....

Happy bday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! w00t

love yeh
Jenn