I like this poem as well so another 5/5 from me.

I feel as if this poem could have been better in some way, but all around it was great..

~Why Do you want to control my mind? If loves not a game whys there so many players?~

is my fav line... vert good job.. 5/5

5/5 This is a very emotional piece. It's so appealing because a lot of people can relate to it.

Im speechless this poem was amazing