by Daniel Mulvany Apr 18, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Do you hear my broken heart, |
by shayla
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I really love this poem |
by Mister 47
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Loving singers comment: |
by LadyPearl
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Very catchy poem, excellent flow |
by Jessica
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Wow.. i LOVED this poem.. it was soo romantic and sweet.. it was just beautiful! the flow was excellent and the rhyming had no mistakes as far as i can see! keep up the wonderful work! |
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That put a smile on my face!! It was so beauifully written!! Another amazing job!! I like how you dont put your poems in stanzas or at least the ones i have read!! 5/5!! Awesome!! |