Your poems are both good. Please check out my poems and vote and comment. thanks a bunch tiffany

Aww i lyked dis...keep it up...love dia mwaz xoxo

Hey this good it makes me think of when i didnt have a girlfriend and then the girl got a bf and how mad i got

Very well written! Very touching and heart felt well done.

Wow...i loved it
keep up the great work!
OXo Laura Marie

5.0 from me. So sad... the yearning feeling I get from this...

That was phenominal. I lvoed this part the most-
My Eyes Wouldn't Wander,
My Hands Would Be Still

You show soooo much emotion. 5/5 easy.