Wow! nitin..its fabulous.. l loved these lines

haven't blinked my eyes for so long
even slept while staring at my fate
wonder why everything went so wrong?
why my love couldn't melt your hate

i wonder the same!
keep writing dear
all the best

luv,
Bharti

Hey darl a great use 0f w0rds in this piece. very t0uching. keep it up

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

"Circle of Regrets" wow... amazing title yaar. It sure attracts attention. Well thought.

'dust has finally settled down
its been a long time since we met
somewhere in my heart i still miss you
while i lead my life with regret'

I just simply loved this ending. I dont think you could have ended this poem any better way. You're a master in writing, you need no one's help. Loved it, felt it and lived it. Regrets are such bitter facts of life, sure turns the meaning of life around. What else to say. Great job once again.

Lots of Love
Michelle

Wut a poem. i loved its theme a lot all the best 5/5

love

Now that was very good...I like the way it was written..and the flow of words was outstanding...very good...hope to read more.

I'm just about to cry right now... this poem has made a mark in my heart... soo much pain... desires wrapped in despair... omg.. i loved this poem........i don't even have words... the title was awesome.. and .. every stanza was so deep.. it is truly a master piece.....
Nitin, you're just too good.. keep writing...
5/5....

Much love,
Ipsita

Wow this poem had a lot of deep emotions coming from it. I can relate with the things you described on here as well
hop you are doing better soon
god bless
Renee

Yeah your title definately attracts attention, and so do teh words in teh poem, this is great stuff
thanks for commenting on my poem "Impulse", I have a new one if you have time to read/rate/comment it
-Stay strong, and keep your words truely spoken

Wow...seriously...WOW!!! This poem is AMAZING!!! I cried!!! I know how you feel!! You're a very talented writer and i'm definately gonna read your other poems!!! WOW WOW WOW!!! That's all i can really say!! 5/5 totally...it's soooooooo good!!!!:)

Aw WoW!!!!!!! this is soooo inspiring!! it moved me to tears actually!! I luv it, I just luv it!!! its wonderfully written..everything in it is just awesome!!!!
you're a gr8 writer and you deserve the best ;)
best of luck
Luv
NemO XxXxXxXxXxX
thanx soooooo much for ur lovely comment..it made my day!! you've a gr8 personality =)

Haai, thanks for your vote. As you can see I'm not sow good in English, but I understand the most of it all. I like your style (of writing) much and I hope you'll publish more and I'll check again...

Thats so sad:( i feel like i can relate to, liek i knwo what ur goign through to an extent, and it is protrayed very well in this poem well done hugs and kisses me

Thanks for the comment you left me and i really liked this poem...

What's up? Its been a week, and no new poem? Better post one soooooooon. :-)

Woah it's really amazing I love it...it's soo original great job 5/5 keep up teh good work
xox
Kristen

Again lovely poem
and great flow

Well....You certainly are clear about what was wrong....
Hope your regrets become resolutions toward future caution...Circles can become open spirals...full of Freedom and upward growth...
Poetry certainly helps get through this stuff...
All the best in future..

How very sad. Your pain can be felt in every word you have penned. Your heart and soul is crying out to be loved and understood. Excellent job on this write.