Hi i love ur poem i am sorry about what happened to ur sister. i thought it was very good poem who shot her if u don't mind me asking

Hey greggie..wow i hadnt read this one!! its such a good poem greggie!! i love it! i know amy is watching over u thats why she didnt let u go on saturday! she knows the troubles uve been going trough but she knows u deserve to stay here!! CHEER UP GREGGIE!!!

Hey Greg, I haven't talked to you in a long time. I have tried to talk to you on IM but you arn't on when I am....is your still the same one? let me know. I am done with poems on this site, but I will check to see if you answer me. kk, stay strong...love ya Greg....bye!!!

Hey Greg...you better put in your title that you need to have tissues near by... this broke my heart, life can be so cruel sometimes, but i admire you for sharing your experience with ppl. Especially one so close to your heart. You did this poem beautifully...your sister will be very proud!!

Much love and blessings,

Sammib

Thats a real sweet poem greg! im sorry for ur loss also!

Linds x

I was recommened to read this poem by Ridwana.

This is so beautifully sad. The use of repeating certain words is very effective. I love the way this poem tells a story, and even though sorrow can be seen, a sort of positive spark is also there. Beautifully written.

Sorry about your loss :(
Take care,
Riffy xx.

Omg this poem is really good i mean at first slownees(me didn't get it)but then i read it again and it made sense

Hey this is sooo beautiful,, i can believe that such a sad thing had to happen to u,, then again sad things are part of life,, goodluck,, and take care,, 5/5

bunches of love,,
MissM..

Hey.. sorry about your sister. your poem was beautiful though. i love how reading it revealed more and more.. it was as if i was reading a story. keep up the amazing work
dee

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... thats so sad im so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry i really am you dont even know..

xoxox
Andrea

Greg im rly srry.its so sad .i know u want her there beside u.she willl always look after u.it rly good

XOXO Breanna