You poetry is very good lately! i really like it. i gave this one a 5/5 keep it up

thanks for sharing

Aww hunii ur poems wasnt horrible at all,in fact it was really inspiring!!!!!
if you think ur poetry is horrible then maybe its just not the right time!!! but hey trust in wut u write tho ;)
keep up the good work and dont feel bad..ur poem wasnt meaningless. it was absolutly meaningFULL!!!
Luv Ya Hun
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First of all I must say, do not ever label anything you do or say, and yourself even, because then you will live up to it, without fail. DO not call your poetry horrible, merely suggest it could use so improvement. Being able to write poems in general proves that you have talent so don't be so hard on yourself, everyone has good and bad days. No, this poem was not a love peom for me, but it had another meaning, so I thank you for posting.

-Tainted Mikochan

Memories-experiences
Painted portraits of the heart,
Killing me, engulfing me
Tearing my soul apart

great stanza. and if you consider this horrible, i wanna know what you think good is haha. great poem, I enjoyed reading it.

It really isn't horrible! And I can see how it could be a love poem, with the trecurring memory and not being able to get it out of your head? Or am I like stolling down a completely wrong path
Don't knock your poetry... because it is excellent!!!!

The repetition works really well here, but the second stanza doesnt really make sense, i think there might be a word missing somewhere :S

This is good! i gave ya a 5/5

This was very good!...one of your best!...keep it up!
~*Linz*~