Aw i love this poem!! it is soo sweet & filled with emotions. You did a great job at expressing how you felt. The flow was really good & it was very descriptive. great job! 5/5*

Wow lovely poem, really caught the sadness of distance ;( and how love can be torn apart
Well written

You accidently spelt state-stay in one stanze I think and maybe you can take a word out here and there such as:
With deep and unfixable scars
could be: With deep unfixable scars.
etc.
I really liked the title as I know people who are states away. I never met them but I feel a real connection with them. I also like how you write from experience. That's good since everyone has something to draw from. Keep writing and don't ever stop.

I can feel the mixed emotions of happiness and sadness within this poem .Such happiness to have met yet so much sadness to depart . I am loving the picture this piece paints , it is so vividly clear like I am standing right there watching it unfold .
Wonderfully written with much emotion !

A few minor things ........

I think you were writing in 4 line stanzas so you will need to separate the first two ....if that is the style you were going for...

Also in this stanza :

She returned to her home later,
Greeted by those stars,
The ones that left her alone,
With deep and unfixable scars.
^^^
I would omit the and in the last line it seems to break the flow and appears to look like just a filler word.

Just some suggestions , but overall the poem is very touching and filled with emotion .

Take care , I am looking forward to reading more soon......

Aww wow, what an amazingly sad yet romantic and wonderful poem. I loved the storyline across it, and the ideas you put into it. There were times where I felt sad, and times where I felt hopeful. I like poems that can alter my moods. I consider that real talent. Keep up your good work! 5/5

My apologies if my perspective on this seems askew, yet I have more of a fancy for the dark poems thus.......

the stars bled through

I must say that line toughed a nerve. Very well executed. Pure imagery in just a four words. Again, masterfully done.

Aww.. dat was very good! but also kinda sad.. itz hard but you guys could still have a long distance relationship :) hehe.. keep up the good work!
jessy

I loved this poem and I can realtat to it alot!
p.s I have a new poem I just posted can you please read and vote on it ??