Haha x) This makes me laugh this one.
It's really well written. I like it... scrap that, I love it. =D

Hey i lyk the sound of ur mums cooking:P...lol i lyked this peom too hehe
love dia mwaz xoxo

L0l this p0em made me laugh ;p its well written and uve rhymed it go0d, well d0ne! keep up ur great writing
l0ve maddy x0ox