Comments : What makes me happy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylead

    I liked it a bit and i for one am not going to critize anyhow good work 4/5 still have nothing new

  • 16 years ago

    by oldthings

    I like it alot. It does tend to usualy be people rather than things that can make you really truly happy. Your poem describes a really basic feeling for a loved one that lots of people share and feel as well.
    Love poems always make me happy. Good write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    I really liked it! nice jobb:)

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is very sweet.. although i felt the it was a bit forced, the rhym was great in the beginin.. but it changed alot towards the end.. overal the poem is really nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    Oh, that was such a beautiful poem! By the end of the second line I was completely drawn into what you were saying, I was even reading it aloud. And I never do that unless the poem was really really good. Defiantly one of my favorites. I look forward to reading your other works

  • 11 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    These words are so deep.pieces like these always runs out of the heart.beautiful piece.i was so eager to find who that person was.great write

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    That's a great thing for being happy and having person that you love...you're poem expressed clearly what's your feeling about..I enjoy reading this a lot. Good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Though I am not a fan of the repetition at the beginning I think you have penned a wonderful piece. Excellent job.