Hey, that is a very very good poem. i loved it

This is a good poem i dont really get it but the flows good and rhyming
well done
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emma
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Funkey monkey
i liked this poem
nice and short
nice job
xoxroxyxox

Great choice of words. i really liked it...
Why ignore the cries
of a broken child,
and judge the lies
of a helpless liar?
thats my favourite part. keep it up
Dee

Well done dear keep writting
good luck

It was well writen,the formation is good however the poems content did confuse me a little

Very well written and explains a lot...just keep doing what you are doing...excellent writter indeed

Hmm really makes me think (lol hard to do) its great whan a short poem can do that. Nice work x

I really liked this. The whole you vs. life thing was well thought out and I love that last line, made me laugh, I guess because of the pure honesty in it. But it was a really good poem. 5/5*

Interesting way of going about this poem. Unique idea.

As always~ Kate

I think that the last 2 stanzas have a little bit of a flow problem but other than that its very well writen!

You are a great writer, all of your pieces show great emotions..you really know how to express yourself!

This is good, I like the you Vs life idea, fairly original and you utilised it very well
your expressions are powerful and conveyed very well the the reader.
overall a very good peice

5/5

"The dinger rings"
Dinger isn't actually a word, is it? Nevermind - it still works fine.

This is confusing, this piece, but that in no way makes it bad. On the contrary, I really like it.

I'm thinking you disagree with certain aspects of life, maybe think them unfair. I could be wrong, but that's how I've read it - and I couldn't agree more.

Nice work Ann Marie. x

Hmm not as good as your last poem.
hmmm.
still enjoyable but you can do better
~Emah
3/5

Another awesome poem, you are talented, but your poems lack confidence, they dont seem to flow too well sometimes, they seem rocky in places, try to believe in what you are writing.
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AnnMarie --
I gave this a 4.0 because the rhyming really confused me. In some stanzas, lines 2 and 4 rhymed. In one stanza, lines 1 and 3 rhymed. And again, in one stanza, nothing at all rhymed. It kind of messed up the flow, and made it a little complicated. I would suggest making all your rhymes in the same two lines, or, make the whole poem not rhyme. But, other than that, it was really good.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I like the theme of this one it brings a new meaning to fight for life. The only thing I don't like is the rocky rhyming it does then it doesn't. If you could stick to one or the other I think it would flow much better

I'll have to agree with the post before me. I don't want to repeat it but the idea was there in your poem.

A poor ending, in my opinion, but I loved the topic of the poem. It's really different from what you usually hear.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5