Aw wow. This is really good. I loved it. I liked the idea that you used, the key to my door. Really good thinking! Keep it up 5/5

`natalie xx

Good peice, the concept you've used is great and well explored and utilised thoughout the poem, the structure is good and the content well expressed.

5/5

Everything was expressed well and the concept was there. Did get a little weirded out by the word blood lol but that's just me and one of those things. The title tied in well with the poem and the key was your strongest imagery.

Great poem, I loved how you portrayed the 'key' here. It was really good, I can relate to it so much. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5

You continue to amaze me Sole haha. you are an amazing poet. i've never personally felt like this, but many of my friends have, and it sucks. if you wrote this about yourself, I hope things get well. just keep writing, your stuff is excellent haha

You changed the last line just for me
You love me so...
Anyhoo
Great
etc
balalalalalalala
500/5 etc

This realy is a super poem, its so good im having trouble comprehending parts of it, but the feeling it conveys is there.

Realy very good!

Jon
x

A great poem, it flows well, its sad and emotional and is good.
well done

A key to your door ey...creative write.
I liked the idea of someone taking the key a locking you in, it's quite metaphorical.

The last line of the second stanza doesn't seem to fit...like there's something missing. It went from people in a line to the key being thrown away, and I can't see the connection.

The sixth stanza was very vivid and stuck in my mind. It was a powerful stanza.

Well done.

This is a great poem. I Loved the stanza:
I gave you my key
Like nobody before
You turned away from me
Locked my only door
I can really relate to it. & also i like the way you ended it. It brings the whole poem together. great job. 5/5*

Great flow on this one, it just all moves so perfectly. I absolutly love the second stanza, great work!