A really beautiful poem, its hard to come up with ones that rhyme too but you pulled it off. i hope you continue on with them
trevor

I liked it alot! I'm sure alot of people feel the same way. Good stuff. :)

You did a really nice job with this poem. I can definitely relate. If this is about you, I hope things get better for you. Hang in there. Keep writing and take care.
~kiesha

The way you put the words and sentences together is awesome and you did a good job making the poem great! Loved it! Kepp it up.

That was intense. i can actually relate.
She's always left out and always neglected,
Never really known, what they expected?
thats my favourite part.. keep it up.
dee

Another good un hun
please dont take this the wrong way but the ending coulda bin better.
but i still love it
gem xoxoxo

This poem is really well wirtten, i liked it very much, you speak well, and your words flow, i like the way this poems flows, and the meaning behind it, keep it up

Greg

This was a really amazing poem. I liked your use of words, it's weally beautiful. keep on writing!

Wonderful poem. I can definitely relate. Its hard to deal with people who expect so much from you, when on the inside you're in pain. You captured the feeling well. wonderful poem.

P.S. thanks for your comment :)

Thanx for the comment... i can really relate to this poem. its really expressive

Hey thanks for the comment by the way!I love this poem,its how i used to feel, but ive changed.Hehe.I really like it, and i like ur other poems, but this ones my favorite i think.but um keep writting

I love this one...i can definatley relate to this poem...your use of words is amazing...good job

Aww that poem can totally relate to this girl.. shes my friend... aww iamma send it to her :) .. awsoem poem :)

Wow!! This is a fabulous poem. You are such a good writer. I love all your writings so far. Keep up the brilliant work.

I love ur poem!! its so awasome!! thanx for commenting on my poem:D!!

Peace,
Winter

LOVED IT!!! u describe feelings so well! it was really good. if u could comment on my work i'd appreciat it
andi

Hey the poem was great ...your rite i can relate to that. i couldnt rite something that good..all my poems are about my ex...lol.
Anyways thanks for the comments

Your right...i can definatly relate to this poem...its really good. you can write well..thanks for the comment on my poem.

Silence

Hey thanx for the comment,
i havent got round to reading all yours,
but i like this one 'coz its so true =]
I hope everythings alright.
Fay is an awesome name btw xD
[xx]

Wow this is really good, i can feel it, there is great emotion in it. well done
xoxo