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whoa... Juls, I love this .. I may have to steal the came and left part in a poem of my own...cause it works prefectly! this is simply a graceful and saddening poem, but its... unforgetable. Well done

Juls hunny,
You have helped me in many ways, and I'm glad I have 33.3% of that bond left. I love you, you're family... *Hugs*, you've already done millions of things for me... thankyou so much

Love always
Jenn, Hubby, and what ever else you call me lol

Beautiful poem...very interesting...I like it...the idea of using the days of the week like that was cool...I want to do something like that...but I don\'t want to steal your idea so I guess I wont...well once again nice poem...lataz

Wow this poem was fantastic...very unique style of writing... but i must say i totally loved it...keep up the good work...im sure to continue readin ur poetry.

Juls, wow. Was this kind of based on a non-fiction event?? If it wasn`t you sure made it sound convincing.
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Hmm, another poem about cutting. Original? I think not. Umm, if you want to write about a topic that is constantly discussed, at least try to be more creative? Try to look at it from a different point of view. That's my suggestion.

Oh one more thing.. "Came Th(e)n Left"

It's not "Than".. I just realized it.

Aw that was so sad! I liked the way you wrote it though, it was very interesting to read, and even though it didn't rhyme it flowed really well, great work!

--Steph

P.s. In the title, it should be "then" instead of "than"