This was really good so many people can relate to this
I like how in the end there was something that makes reality a little better
great poem

Nice poem! Keep writing.

I can really relate to this poem the feelings are familiar and the prfound content is clear to me..you are an outstanding free verse poet

I like the emotion in it, but the beginning didnt really tie into the overall story of the poem. other than that, it was great.

I think everyones has felt like this once in their life. Another great write. Keep it up. You a great poet.

This is good . I feel that everyone can relate to this at least once in their life . Love this write . Good job (:
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Another great poem! Well Done! 5/5

Taylor

The flow and the emotion are great! very impressive i hope everyone love to read this,,,,,,5/5

What a good free verse! writing them well with beautiful emotions, very interesting! awesome!

Loved this one! Great feelings expressed! I love it because I mean everyone can relate to it in their life once in their life probably! Great job with this one! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for the comment on my poem, it meant a lot to me! :)

Innoc3ntStar

Good job. Interesting read.

This is quite sad, but a well penned poem. I have enjoyed reading your work. Nice job again.