O0o cool! I like it! very nicely written! reminds me of times on the dance floor...hehe lol amanda

Another great write! Perfect ending to a wonderful, sensational poem!

Wow this poem was awsome... it was kinda long... but amazing...
keep it up!

Enjoyable read...great flow and structure...i like the passion in which you write..you have a pure heart...5/5 read my latest"GIFTS OF SORROW" "ARABIAN SANDS" "MY TEARS"