Liked this one much more that part one....you did a very nice job...i will give youa 5/5~...keep it up!
~*Linz*~

OMG wow! What a twisted but good ending! I mean, I feel sympathy for everyone in the story, but I can feel the anger the wife held in her letter. This was an excellent fit. Keep it up! 5/5

Wow, what a surprising continuation! You kept me wanting to read more, and before I knew it, it was the end of the poem. Great visualization. You have a fancy for telling great stories in the art of poetry... excellent!

Keep Writing!

Wow, I read both parts. What a twisted ending! Seriously, that's pretty sick. Very creative on your part though. You have to love poems that tell a story, and you chose great words to tell it. I could almost see the hand (gross I know) and the watch. Nice job.

I was a bit confused when i read the first one, but i forgot there was 2 parts :P
they are SO great!! i swear. awesommmme

-kat-