I really like this poem. It flows really nice too. And sad enough its what people do to the people they love, I know to well.
hope you get your love back soon
god bless
Renee

What a great poem, reall enjoyed it. You managed to express your emotions whilst maintaing your rythm, great job.
Hope everything works out for you.
Jade x

You could tell that you loved her a lot. And what she did to you was wrong... but life goes on so...yeah. Well any ways it was a really great poem you got the point out and maintained an excellent flow! It really touched me. 5/5 Keep it up!
-cheers- ^_^