A well written and expressed poem. You have used emotive language and atmospheric terms- although- to make it better, I would extend the stanzas a little. That way, there is more for the reader to engage with. But overall, a good write and well done =D.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

Wow what a loong well written poem that expressing your feelings great stuff girl keep it up...

I can relate 2 this in sum way... nice poem i like it heapz

Wow that poem is so good. Its like really really really good. It was fun reading too. Keep writing. your work is awesome.
~Ebony~

This is interesting and i actually liked it, but honestly, it didn't make too much sense.

Very long but the rhythm kept strong. I'm a poet and I didn't know it lol (how original? haha ... loed the poem, 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox