Great poem

Thank you Freshta

So nice.
good luck!

CK

As i said, it is deep like an ocean
it gave me 2 much emotion
where is a tissue with lotion?

Lovely writing. Its hard to deal with friends betraying you, but you still have other friends who will make it better. I hope everything goes well.

Excellent poem. Sad too. I hope things get better...5/5

oh && thanks for your comment.

Dude, I totally love this poem...

Excellent poem. I hope your that friend read this and feel ashamed.
you are a good person cus you really care.

I love that poem! thats so cool! your a true poet!

Dude......... you made me cry, that is exactly what happen to me.
you are just saying my feelings in your words. THE BEST POEM EVER

It made me sad that so beautiful

I like this poem a lot... i basically went through the same thing! keep up a good work! i gave you a 5 on here by the way! :)

I'm digging this poem! it's really easy to relate! keep your flow going:) and thx foe my comment

I can totally relate. exellent.

I like it, Its that blind faith you have in people, That trust that seems to always last. Reminds me of some friends i've had, Where the only thing wrong is that its over, Nobody is wrong because it can be forgiven. i like it

I luved it, it came from the heart.

That reminded me a lot of me and my old best friend!! You did great on it! 5/5

I really like this poem, its something alot of people can relate to. its so sad when friendships fall apart and i know exactly what its like. great poem, keep up the great work
love maddy xoxox

Nicely done. I like the repetition of I would not ask you at the beginning of each stanza.

Nice poem, though somewhat sad, not sure if you lost your friend, but if you did, perhaps it would be worth trying to get that person back into your life?

Its never to late to make up for things