A well deserved win of poem of the week, well done luanne, this write was simply amazing, and very inspirational to budding writers! You are a true writer, well done!

Oh my...this is so refreshing. Such a passionate memory, makes me want to fall in love all over again.
I absolutely adore the ending...just beautifully worded, like pure magic.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Very nice piece Luanne... I very much enjoyed this poem, your feelings are so beautifully described. Don't you just love summer and the wonderful feelings it brings :) Well done on winning POTW!

Beautiful, Luanne! The imagery pulls me in and I feel like I'm watching it from afar. Absolutely lovely write!

Luanne, what a beautiful penned, you're greater than great poet ever. congrats...keep writting and keep smiling, have a good day, take care.

Hell0o this was really g0od a great use 0f w0rds in this piece. very well written. keep it up!! =]

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