by Kristin Apr 24, 2006
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Love, romance /
love is
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Read the volumes of fairy tales, |
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I LOVE this poem, you know your way with words. Keep it up! |
by Kaylee
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I remember all these stories and they are lovely. You have such vivid imagery as when you mention a fairytale, it takes us back to them. I would suggest changing these because with both when and if in the same sentence, it doens't make much sense: |