Comments : Vanilla Extract

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Vanilla
    mmmm
    vanilla Icecream!!
    yum!!
    good poem
    xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Kinda hard to understand, but still very good, i love the metaphors that you used.

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    Absolutely love the title
    so well put with the waterfalls cascading
    i especially like the last verse, sort of makes the poem
    xxx.