This is a really sweet poem

Awwww!!!! I'm so sorry for ut niece!!! ur poem was really well expressed to wut shes passing through.I hope this turns to be just a memory..hope to pass through this =)
I luved ur poem keep it up gal
Luv Ya
NemO XxXxXxXxX

Omg!!!!!!!! so sad!!! im so glad u r talented w/ words that u can turn such painful thruth...into such beautiful poems :)
i desperatly pray for ur neice!!! she is very lucky to have an aunt like u who cares :)
I LOVE YA!!!

Sad . . even sadder that it's true. Beautiful poem - it really shows how much you care for your niece. I hope your sister gets well, and your niece is taken safely home.

Peace. [Sole]

This is sad and I hope all is well soon. Very intense and written so well. Beautiful yet sad.- 5/5

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Aw this is so sad! It really made my eyes tear up. This is really good though. The flow & rhyme scheme was good & the way you ended it was perfect. Great job!

The peice is very well written with a good structure and flow. the content really is very well composed and clearly describes the situration. it really demonstrates how much you care for your neice, she really is lucky to hve you. i hope that things get worked out and she managed to escape the circumstances described in your poem.

5/5

O wow im sooo sorry ta no that this is a true poem that you write about your own niece
its a tarrable thing to hear n i hope things get better!
n for your sister!
what ever is wrong with her i HOPR n PRAY that she gets better n can be the mom in your nieces like that she needs!
good luch
n its an awosme poem
but it brings treas to ma eyes ta no that this is true!
much love
always alana

Excellent
5/5
love
amy

Excellent poem..a great writte..and once again you put the words together so well and express your feelings so clearly..and the poem is so sad still..and its like..as a poem it hasnt effected the story in any way..and i jus hop now that your sister gets better..and your niece is alrite..keep writing..coz although all ive read of your poems is so sad..they are beautiful. perfect.:) gd luck
xxx
lotsa love...mezangel

I think that I have read this before.. but either way this is a great poem & I loved all of it. It's very sad & I'm really sorry about your niece. I hope that everything works out for the best. Good luck!

Great poem, i loved it..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I love the way you transformed this sad story into a beautifully sad poem.
What really captured me about this poem, is that, you tell about a little girl, so innocent and fragile, she can't do anything about her situation and needs someone to take care of her. She doesn't know about the cruel world outside, and that's what makes you want to protect her.

It's a beautiful message! I hope she's doing better by now.

Great job 5/5

W.O.W

This was really gooood. Long but great! I have a neice too, And I'd be devasted if something like this happened to her. I love her so much! Really good poem though. Has alot of emotion within in. It was just, Wow. Loved it!! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Its so sad and sad that it is true but it is adorable how much you care and how you wrote it wow so beautiful!!!!

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

Wow, at least she's got you there for her!

This is amazing. please vote an comment on mine if you get a chance

Aww, this is so sad, but tits my kind of poem, it was absolutely perfect, keep it up
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Wow....im speechless...That is an amazing poem. I love how it tells a story, but that is such a sad one--- There is so much emotion in it...You did a fantastic job. I know how it feels to want to help someone you love, but you just can't---5/5