Oooh, this is so gripping...I love it!
The quick flow adds an element of intensity, which I think brought the poem to life.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow i really like this poem....5/5

Mallori

Wow I am mystified that was such a great write!
The imagry you created with your words are so vivid. You described in detail the process the body goes through during nightmares while keeping the flow flawless!!
Loved this poem lots! 5/5

Thanx for commenting on my poem, i've got quite a few submitted if you want to check them out xx i love this- your meaning is put across so well- vivid, chilling, haunting. thanx for your knid words as well, my poems are unfortunately based on truth but i use them as a way of expressing anger, and i'm really ok, but thanks anyway. nat xx