Comments : Time to move on

  • 14 years ago

    by MidNightBeauty

    5/5 i loved it..great poem

  • 14 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Well done...i lyked 5/5....love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Colten,
    This is a really good poem. The words in it really ment a lot. I need to do the same in my life too.
    god bless
    Renee

  • 14 years ago

    by -annie vandergaag

    Colton.. wow. that poem was so fitting for me right now -- hung out with my ex tonihgt and we started to chat, but my.. it's tough and we broke up in september! i need to move on, and i just don't really know how.. relationships are frusturating. at the same time, i read a beautiful poem about how we live for God-- maybe that's what i need to do rather than sit and wonder about something that could happen later but not know.
    thanks for the vent (hehe).
    just shows your ability to really get someones emotions. excellent job!
    -annie

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Colton, this is so sad but I know what you mean in the poem. Its well written and shows a lot of emotions coming out. Best Wishes
    God Bless
    Renee