This would make a really good song. It flows nicely & my favorite part was
What I found
In this town
It gives me some feeling of fame
This is
Over
I'm calling out to a force from above
I dont know why but its just got a nice feel to it. but great job! 5/5*

Captivating rhythm and mysterious emotion

I really like your style and how your words flow from inside to paper or computer (where ever you write things down). I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. The only thing I didn't really like about this one? "Why does this make me a wreck?"
Just sounds weird to me.
But that's my opinion and I don't hold much to it because opinions change like the days, and for me, even more frequently.

I like the flow and wish I could hear this song! lol. I can't really think of corrections soooo good job!