Great write, have nothing bad to say about this one. ^_^

Great poem! It flowed really nicely. The rhyme was good. Keep up the good work!
5/5

I liked this one. Short and simple. Loved this line; "Sometimes love hurts so much, but we just long for one more touch." Thats very true. Theres people in bad relationships, And it hurts so much. But they keep coming back to feel there touch. Awesome poem hun. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

I think this is a very truthful poem, especially about turning to your mum when things get tough.
On the line "Sometimes i think of friends who've bin and gone..." It should be "been."
I liked it, it was a touching and original write.