It's Over

by Sean Dohr   Apr 27, 2006


She used to be the person,
who I would idolize.
Now, she is the one person,
who I truly despise.

I used to think she loved me,
when she looked into my eyes.
Now, when I look into hers,
I can see through all the lies.

All her sickening games,
that she used to play.
All her anguish and sob stories,
that I dealt with everyday.

Eventually, I had enough,
of all her negativity.
Her anger then, was not hers,
it was transferred onto me.

It wasn't worth ruining my life,
over some disconnected girl.
I had to stay on track,
so I could make it in the world.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Great job. I loved this poem. I especially loved the part :

    It wasn't worth ruining my life,
    over some disconnected girl.
    I had to stay on track,
    so I could make it in the world.

    I could so relate to this poem it`s kind of scary. You are so right in your message to, we need to start getting the negative people out of our lives, so we can keep our own positivity. Loved it. Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Ooooh, very nice....this flows so well without losing emotion. It's also very relatable.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow this is really good. I could definitely relate to this one well (except with a guy) but this was really good. I love the strength that you exerted into it. Great job! 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    The last line was really powerful
    good job
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    This was an awesome Poem, I liked it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. Very nicely done, The anger you pertrayed was great.

    Peace, Joe

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