Wow... Angry and strong. You tell 'em!!

I like the exaggeraion, it was creative, and kind of true.

Powerful yet poetic...I like it! The imagery in this is awesome, I could see it all plain as day!
Oh and the last line, just wow!!!!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I liked how this was exaggerated! I also liked the vivid descriptions! The first line is really catchy and of course is exactly what people say when they are really angry, and you keep up the tension in the whole piece. Even though this sounds like a rant it is completely controlled throughout and you don't lose track of what you are trying to say at all. The imagery is quite gross and so is really effective. Hehehe :)