Ohhhh this poem is HOTT
Sad
But it was Said very well
and your rhyme was Great.
Great job
keep it up
5/5
~TPOMH~

I liked the flow of this poem! I really fancied some of the lines in there. Great job. Keep writing!

Beautiful emotion penned, flowed well yet beautiful expressive emotions, keep writing, and thanks for your nice comment, much appreciated, take care.

bert.

Making out love last-I think you meant our love last.

Apart from that...I frikken LOVE this!
I found this to be very intense, there was so much depth and emotion screaming through the words and the ending was so beautifully written, very sad and yet such a pleasure to read.