Comments : To Stay Forever

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    The last words were the best "to learn to let go" awesome great poem
    Take care
    HS

  • 17 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Omg! kick ass poem! i loved the way your were setting up this "perfect" little scene and remembering everything thats happened and going to happen, but the best part was by far the end where you take this sudden twist and say "learn to let go". amazing!
    please keep writing cause i enjoy your work very much and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    *AntiSocial16*