Comments : Hard to belive your gone....

  • 18 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    I'm so sorry...i've been there!! i had a BAD day today with guys!! OMG i had to get home before i started crying!! it's funny how we let them have so much power over us isn't it? it SUCKS!! there's one thing boys r good at and that's breaking hearts!! i'm so sorry!! i'm with ya tho!! GREAT POEM!! 5/5 try and keep ur head up...keep a smile on and the world will think your fine...i know...it sucks!! im here to talk!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Wow...thats good...as i was reading it i really felt what u were going through...its awesome that u write songs too..i try to, but they turn out so ..blah...Now that i look at it again..this poem could actually make a good song...it kinda looks like one...cause of the repeated words:):)...Thanks for the comments:D