I love this poem I gave you a 5/5!

I hv to say my honest comment! I gave it 4/5!
the rhyme was kinda over andsecond stanza didn't hv to rhyme that way!!
it was a good poem but comparing to the others...its not ur kind of the good work
anyway keep it up and plz don't get mad at my honest comment (A)
Luv Ya
NemO XxXXxXxX

Well..of cors i want honest comments...so nething like critics dont effect me..ill try harder nxt time!:)
xxx
mezangel

I liked the complicated rhyme stucture of the poem - it worked really well with the concept. However:

And way you are

Should be

And the way you are

I also don't think that you should have put lil' in. It's a bit too informal for the rest of the poem, 'In my soul you've seem to lay' is a deep line, ad 'my lil' star' ruins this. All you need to do is change it to little to make the poem flow better, and sound more sohpisticated to go with the rhyme scheme better.

Peace. [Sole]

Awww its butiful hun x

It's because people may change
And feelings may change
^^Double words. The two changes kind of takes away the impact. Plus you have this in the same stanza:
But I would never exchange
^^Try reading that stanza out loud.
That seems to make me smile
^^Seems a bit formal. Maybe just, 'That makes me smile.'
Your poem is good but the flow feels a little off in places. It's a great friendship poem and all.
p.s sorry for the late comment. Exams are a pain :p