Almost Perfect

by Tibby_x   Apr 29, 2006


The splashed light dapples the courtyard
Makes pony-patterns on the pebbles

And the grass under my feet
Crunches almost perfect

Streaming through darkened corners of the courtyard
Sunlight slips over the pebbles

And I feel the grass growing under my feet
While I sit almost perfect

With my fingertips splintering the fountains rhythm in the courtyard
Fat droplets streaking the pebbles

And hearing the grass under my feet
As the light pours down almost perfect

I feel almost as complete as the picture

With the water-coloured light dappling the courtyard
And making pony-patterns on the pebbles

[Hey I would really appreciate comments because I wanna know if its worth putting my stuff on here/if people like what I do]

N.B if pony-patterns makes no sense to you, its just the world Dapple always makes me thing of ponies because of Dapple-grey ponies

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