That was beautiful
to say the least
i hope soon you start to feel better
good luck!
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I loved the poem, because it's so sincere and truthful. I know the feeling, you want to free yourself from pain and nobody knows about it, but you don't want the ones you love to suffer because of that.
I liked the way you expressed, all your feelings and mixed emotions...all the hurting.

Hope you're feeling better.

Great job! 5/5

Great poem I loved every part especially the dear ana dear mia
Excellent idea
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So sad i felt like i was about to cry haha i really enjoyed it you have alot of talent and you write very poetically

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

B-E-A-UTIFUL, great poem well defined Love it till the very end!

Wow, another awesome poem, keep it up
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You described your situation and feelings really well in this piece. There are no flaws,,,I love it! 5/5 Hope things get better for you--