Comments : Don't Cry For Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh huni I really hope you're Okay!! nothing is worth it believe me!! you're a gr8 person and you deserve the best =)
    keep up ur talent and cheer up its not worth the depression *hugz*
    Luv Ya
    NemO XxXxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenie

    Oh meeee geee!! that was just....so much to take in at once!!! it was an AMAZINGLY written poem! i really liked how u were writting to more than one person...just the way it clashed, made since! im so sry sis for mia&&ana but remember what i wrote u in ur emails...u dont need to be like these stick thin girls...u r PeRfEcT the way u r now!! i love u and ur beautiful!!
    ur lil sis

  • Oh hun this is so sad, if somethings wrong you really should tell me about it so I can help you. You've wrote it perfectly, it all flows, it's clear in what it's about and it's worded nicely, but please, if any of this is true, talk to me ok hun
    take care xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. It's filled with so much emotion. Great job! I really liked this stanza:
    You have been there for me
    You helped me through it all
    But I am depressed again
    You can't catch my final fall
    Really sweet. Great job! 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a fantastically written peice, great composition and progression with a well implimented structure. the actual content too is fantastic, powerfully expressive with a good use of description and feeling. as far as i can tell not a single flaw.

    5/5

    ps. i really hope that things start to improve for you and that the feelings you displayed within this peice do not last too long.

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    I really hope this isn't true! =/ am worried now. will you let me know you're ok? Have missed reading your poems, you're so talented, can so relate to this poem in particular, you express yourself so well hun, thankyou for all your lovely comments too recently they've been a lifesaver xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BlOodYtEaRSoFMInE

    I like this poem because I've got a sister who's going through similar problems so I knwo what it's like. I also feel like it's too much sometimes. Take care and stay strong,
    XBlOodYtEaRSoFMInEX

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxtatiixox11

    Wow dis is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Wow i really loved this poem. i am in awe. it is unbelievably good. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Netta

    Why do you want to die i know that you are having bad times but every body hurts but you have to be able to trust in the Lord and he will see you through

  • Uhm...proper good!
    but that is a serious thing to write about!
    but that was a well nice piece..

    ♥LovinIt ♥

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    ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    Wow thats an awsome poems i hope you arnt goin threw this your self!
    but its awsoem! i love your wrok!
    great job
    much love
    always alana

  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    Wow thats an awsome poems i hope you arnt goin threw this your self!
    but its awsoem! i love your wrok!
    great job
    much love
    always alana

  • 18 years ago

    by Trista Jorstad

    Honestly I loved your poem. I could relate to it alot. You should check out mine if you want. Later

    ♥ Trista ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Touching poem
    i can sense deep hurt in this poem
    its good to vent feelings thru poems
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Waow!! dis was a really nice poem..well written..and extremely strong emotions shown shown perfectly in perfect words...although the rhyming scheme does seem a bit out of place at a time...(the first stanza) i think the words are meant to be...a great write..and thank you for the comment!
    xxx :)
    mezangel

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw that is really sad & I hope that you don't really feel that way. The poem is really good & the flow & rhythm of it went along really well. Great job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    WOW, i loved it soooo sad and i hope it isnt true.. in the first stanza

    Dear world, dear family
    These are my last words
    I really tried to tell you
    But my screams wasn't heard

    i thought might be better like this

    Dear world, dear family
    These are my last words
    I really tried to tell you
    But my screams were not heard

    just my thoughts 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Spike

    I absolutely LOVE this poem! its really good