"To laugh and cry without intention
no understanding of comprehension"

^My favourite lines, they just stood out to me for some reason. The rhyming in this poem was great, didn't sound forced or anything like that.

You also chose powerful words to express yourself, you have a lot of talent you know.

I think im speechless but not wordless this has gotto be one of the best poems ive read of these 4 months great job ben
Take Care]
HS

Good job! it would be nice to be young agian, we had nothing to truelly worry about. . . good job keep it up! and Godbless!
erica