Really great poem, so sad but beautiful. nice work!

Aww that was sad but happy at the same time! great job!

So sad! I love the way that you've used such a great mixture of some really sweet ideas tainted with a hint of some genuine sadness. The ending was great as it really tied the whole poem together. What I especially liked was the sense of progression throughout the poem but that the message was always the same "a once in a lifetime love". A really great poem and I loved it 5/5 x
ps: there are a couple of small spelling mistakes; 'there' should be 'their' for example but apart from that it was perfect.

Happy and sad all wrapped in oe poem!

My fav stanza was:
His knees were shaking as she walked up the isle
His mind filled with worries and fears
But they soon flew away when she smiled
The imagery created reminded me of watching a scene in a movie.Well done!

I thought it was really beautiful at first but that one long line in the final stanza threw me off. Since you have three lines in each stanza, maybe limit the word choice a bit. Here's an example:
One They'll start again when he also enters the heaven above
could be:
One they'll restart when he enters Heaven above.

Cute poem. Very sad story - but it's true love. There were a few mistakes;

His knees were shaking as she walked up the isle

Unless you mean a small island, Aisle has an a at the front.

The way she laughed The was she smiled

The was she smiled?? The WAY she smiled I think . . .

They loved each other with every piece of there heart

there should be their

love like theres was rare

again, theirs' not theres.

Other than that - the poem is awesome - a really great ballad, which tells an inspiring story of true love!

Peace. [Sole]

Omgg.. she died?? waahhh! that was such a good poem! it was amazing, and so beautiful.. keep it up!!
jessy

Beautifully written peice of poetry. I loved it. Keep up the awesome work.

Peace, Joe

This is so cute your an amazing writer!!!

This is so cute your an amazing writer!!!

Another great poem, though sad but i've to say this is beautiful write, well done!

Excellent poem, I gave you a 5:D

Very well written peice, full of feeling and clearly expressed. the wy you managed to contain so many emotions seemlessly is incrediable, fantastically implimented ideas in this peice

This poem is excellent because it feels like it's a whole story on it's own
-Clαяissα ♥

AAWWWWWWWWWWWWW! sad, but sweet! very good with your flow! keep it up!

Very cute poem... I feel just like this with my love. Great job explaining it. Excellent.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5