Aww hunnie i feel for u sweetie! write as much down about how u feel it helps abit! luv ya x x x

Aww this is so sad and i feel for you too. ur a good writing hun. good luck

I was diffrent but I liked it even though the rhyme scheme seemed a little forced in places

:(....well i got people talking abt my guy..n it was true...dont knw for u but take care
love dia mwaz
p.s 5/5 i lyked it

I like it and im happy that u r feeling at least a little bit better

No no - saftey pin is not the answer!! I know things seem tough - but men are not worth a single tear and the ones that are will never make you cry unless its happy tears!! Fact - you will find someone better for you! Really like your poem though!!

Godbless
Sammib