"She wants to get over him
yet she just can't let go..."

wow. that is a lot like myself.
this poem is AMAZING, just like many of your others.
i like it. 5/5
Lauren

I feel your pain. This is exactly how i feel!!!!
But one advice i give you is dont give up.
Because once you give up is when he will notice you.
This is what happened to me.

Thats rele rele good! I like the way you rhyme...very well done... x x x

Wow.. its wonderful.. check out mine if you like. they aren't as good as yours, but if ur bored u might want to read them.. you are really talented.. 5/5

Yea! We do relate in this situations...anyways! yea u can email me to at iloveaj_09@hotmail.com or ms_carebear_09@hotmail.com.....just email me whenever...and yea love is complicated sometimes and I hate that but I'm with someone that I love to death he is the sweetest thing on Earth...well I love this poem its the BOMB...well i gotta go...

Peace
..*..Renee Loves Alex..*..

That is a good....and thanks for commenting on my poem my crush.....

Hey! I have just read a few of your poems, and I wasn't quite sure what to put on the comments, because I hate leaving tiny little comments that don't say much - so unless I have lots to go on about, I try not to leave anything at all. Anyway, now that I've gotten to a more recent poem, I can tell that you've grown so much as a writer over time - even over a short amount of time, you just got better with each one. And I know it's random to say, but it always makes me proud when I see someone progressing, I get all happy for them lol. So anyway, this one was really good, especially the beginning - I really liked the first two stanzas. I also enjoy the fact that you have so many love poems. Some people like variety, but I will always be a lover of love. Nice writes! -Stefhy