Awwwwwww. I love this poem. It is soo sweet and i love your choice of words. Keep writing.
-hayley-
5/5 from me.

Lets go somewhere secluded,
Experience tranquility.
Just you and me in love
Along side our liberty

^^^ i was smiling by this stanza Sie! Beautiful write, I never walk away after reading your work displeased!!
Chels

Simply beautiful write simon, very touching yet so heartfelt emotion....well done!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! This is sooo beautiful. It's mellifluous wordw are simply breathtaking. Lovely word from a lovely soul

Beautiful heartfelt poem Simon . The way you've used the use of those 10 words is amazing . I love this poem . As well did the judges . And I can see why , my friend.

Interesting... Sweet & romantic. It's good!