Wow. you've managed to get a hell of a lot in those few lines. I think it is really good. I love your choice of title and the first line really takes a hold.

Do I see myself in the world I wrote about? To an extent. I am by no means perfect and my faults are just as human as anyone else, but unlike many I am aware of them and do try to work harder and to earn happiness in life and I know full well nothing is going to be handed to me on a plate.

Thanks for your comments. They're much apreciated.

Jemma

Thank you for commenting mine, this is me returning the favor... ^_^
I like this one, short, but still nice. =] 5*
-Flaming

I think this poem is really good and mysterious. I like your online name too, lol : )
~Jules

I REALLY liked this poem! The last line especially...to wade through this web. Absolutely beautiful. Great job! And thanks for the comment = ). Keep it up!
~Jules

That's waaay too funny. I had forgotten that I read this poem before and I liked it even more the second time, lol. Honestly, it was very good...and I'll continue to read your poems.
~Jules

Nightmares can be more real then you'd like to think.....