Comments : What Do You Do?

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow.. This is really sad. Such a powerful poem.. And it kind of explains how i'm feeling right now. Really great job on this one. I honestly loved it! Keep it up *hugs* 5/5

    `natalie xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashley

    I loved it, it was dark and sad, but full of emotion and feelings. 5/5 ~ash

  • "What Do You Do When People Think Your Smiling?
    While On The Inside Your Truthfully Crying?
    And On The Inside You Wish You Were Dieing?
    And That You Have So Many Secrets That You've Been Hiding?" first of all..I love these lines. second..I hope this poem isn't true! because it's sad and I can relate to some of it and it's horrible to think that you can go thru so much pain. If this is true I hope you get better and it's a great poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Noooooooo, you cant give up. i know this is just how you feel but dont give up. you are such an excellent writer and you hsould continue putting your talent on paper. im sorry you feel this way its sad to know you are hurting like this, i am always here xxxxxxxxx