That was really good, different but it was really a great read. keep it up
xxxxx

I really don't like those one liner reviews so I won't respond with the usual ones.

You really can write, Silver, this poem does capture that had a really bad day type of mood from the start but ends with a graceful things can get better ending.

I imagined it was you, as the headlines
Hurtled from above, this time,
^For me this has the meaning of having more power that somebody who might have hurt you in the past. Maybe that's just me who usually felt like, "the ant."

But, the dampened; it soon dried,
And my tears were not for you.
^^Does this mean that not everything hurts forever and that the peson was not worth the tears or that the person does not deserve tears as they were not really as bad?

I love your poems. They always seem to have some deeper meaning even if you don't intend them to be.

Really great image, certainly encaptures the bitterness that you describe in the final stanza. I love your use of juxtaposition and the imagery in the poem is excellent. You don't go over the top with the language prefering generally to speak in plain terms and I think that to a point this helps to strenghten the poem as an over-active vocabularly usually detracts from the power of the write. Flows beautifully, I loved every line, 5/5 x

The imagery of the days events mixed with the passion and flow of the poem made it outstanding

That was really good, I love the way that you described everything with so much emotion, but then you ended it with an apology. You did a great job on this.. I could somewhat relate to it.

The way you put your emotions into words was truly amazing, you added so much to the moment, you really added that extra something that made that poem extrordinarily good. I am utterly amazed with your talent and words.. keep writing, you will most definetly get places...

**meggie**

Lol hate to say it, but i laughed at that last sentence. ^_^ very cute poem, to me. you go girl.

This poem is... interesting. i gotta say i didnt quite get it...after re-reading it you can see that apparently you were mad at someone... or something. The emotions just dont seem very deep. As long as you got to write exactly what you felt, its perfect to me. -jen-

It was good different but i liked it and i could feel your frustration great jobb xxALLYxx

You're a sophisticated, funny woman......

Very nice poem once again. I liked these lines:
"On a shaded wooden bench,
The insect military invaded my meal.
A swat with a newspaper proved
Insignificant - just as the trampled ant was." You've done a great job on this poem. There's not much else I can say. I don't find anything wrong in it. It's wonderful. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

P.S. If you're wondering why I didn't do 'That Time Of Year' It's because I've already done it. Under this name ``[&&];;its>>TaLe3e♥.x. ..If you click on it, it will take you straight to my profile. Just letting you know. So I'll pick another one. =)

Wow. Fantastic insight into the links of nature.

Let me apologise for my bitterness.
See, it is only my mood for
Today...

Great ending. I like how this poem manages to tell the reader a lot without going in to the details of the story behind it. Once again, great use of language

Wow.. what a great poem.. very original .. and wonderful choice of words.. a very enjoyable read.. but you spell "apologise" this way.."APOLOGIZE"

It has a new taste nice one and u write what is in ur mind nice work

Great poem...I like the metaphors and the description. It brings it to life and I could almost feel the frustration fuming from the screen. Great Job, 5/5.

Beatiful poem that kept me reading and even felt that bad day mood. Amazing :)

Great poem, i loved it. the expression was beautiful 5 from me :)